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Wednesday, 1 August 2018
Introduction About Me!
This week we made intros for room 4 at Blaketown school in Greymouth in the South Island. We had to base it on our personalities and who we are, then we found some pictures that related to us.
Tena koe Caitlyn Your introduction certainly shares a lot of information about YOU! I like the way you have grouped ideas in paragraphs and how you chose images that reflect your information. Tino pai! Koka Jo
Hi Caitlyn Wow what an introduction! The children at Blaketown school will definitely learn a lot about you. I also like your use of paragraphs, which help the reader when there is a lot of information. Mum
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Hi Caitlyn,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you put your intro in paragraphs.
from Mekayla,🐼
Thank you Mekayla
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Tena koe Caitlyn
ReplyDeleteYour introduction certainly shares a lot of information about YOU! I like the way you have grouped ideas in paragraphs and how you chose images that reflect your information. Tino pai!
Koka Jo
Thank you.
DeleteHi Caitlyn
ReplyDeleteWow what an introduction! The children at Blaketown school will definitely learn a lot about you. I also like your use of paragraphs, which help the reader when there is a lot of information.
Mum
Thank you.
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